| I had a good time during the winter holiday. My family and I went to the west lake and saw beautiful scenery. We went sightseeing, shopping, enjoyed some special snacks and learned more about the culture and history of Hangzhou city. To my joy, I made a few new friends there. The most important is that I had a good rest.and enjoyed ourselves! I want to visit the Great Wall during the coming summer holiday. Maybe then we will have a better time and learn more about our culture. |
| 試題分析：這是壹篇開放作文。本文要求文章的提示並結合自己的寒假經歷完成這篇作文，我們要用恰當的語言把所列舉的內容準確地表達出來。寫作中要包含寒假中和家人的旅遊地方，表達出旅行中的所見所聞，並寫出暑假中旅行的期待和計劃等方面進行陳述，表達出自己的觀點等。根據材料內容可知本文主要是壹般過去時態，人稱主要是第壹人稱，註意並列連詞的使用及主謂壹致問題。寫作中註意上下文的過度，符合邏輯關系。 亮點說明這篇短文簡明、扼要地描述了自己的寒假旅行歷程，並表達出了暑假的期待和計劃，符合文中的要求。其中使用了壹些固定句式和短語，包含表語從句的準確使用是本文的壹大亮點.如To my joy，The most important is that I had a good rest.and enjoyed ourselves!，have a better time，學習中再註意總結,牢記壹些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當引用,使文章的表達更有邏輯性,更富有條理。 |