| Dear Peter， I’m writing to ask whether you are able to do me a favor. I want to have a pen friend hopefully a girl in her early twenties and with interests similar to mine. In my mind she is someone who is interested in traveling swimming and playing table tennis. Besides it would be better for her to have a pet dog as I have kept one at home for some time. With such a pen friend I think I can share with her our traveling experiences taking care of pets or whatever we have in common. And I believe I will improve my English by doing so and learn more about her country. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Best regards Li Hua |
| 試題分析：考查應用文中的書信的寫作。希望通過外籍教師Peter 找壹位英語筆友。描述壹下妳理想中筆友的條件，並說明為什麽選這樣的筆友。要點都已經給出，書信類短文的關鍵在於要點要全面包括，不能有遺漏和省略。但是要點只是提綱，考生還要在此基礎上增加細節，同時註意謀篇布局的順序，運用合適的連接詞連接全文，同時選擇高級的詞匯和語法項目讓文章更有文采。審題時註意本文使用壹般現在時，描述要盡量選擇簡潔的語言，運用合適的語法規則和詞匯把各要點都準確表述出。難點在於選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運用高級詞匯和固定短語準確表述。還要用適當的連接詞被句子連接起來，象for instance, Furthermore,等詞，這樣文章顯得更連貫。 亮點說明In my mind she is someone who is interested in traveling swimming and playing table tennis. 這句話用了定語從句， it would be better for her to have a pet dog as I have kept one at home for some time. 這句話用了it做形式主語的句子和原因狀語從句， With such a pen friend I think I can share with her our traveling experiences taking care of pets or whatever we have in common. 這句話是whatever引導的讓步狀語從句，範文中還使用了 Besides這樣的關聯詞。 |